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	<title>Comments on: Writing Excuses Episode 4: Beginnings</title>
	<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/</link>
	<description>Fifteen minutes long, because you're in a hurry and we're not that smart.</description>
	<pubDate>Mon, 12 May 2008 00:06:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Chris (The Book Swede)</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-216</link>
		<dc:creator>Chris (The Book Swede)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Mar 2008 13:06:43 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-216</guid>
		<description>Really like this podcast :) Just pimped it on the blog. I got a book to review the other day with a hook that I thought was brilliant.

It's by Lauren Groff, from The Monsters of Templeton:

"The day I returned to Templeton steeped in disgrace,the fifty foot corpse of a monster surfaced in Lake Glimmerglass."

Tres cool. Maybe you could do a show on names ... or maybe not, now that I think of it, how would you approach the subject?! Could be difficult.

Best wishes,
~Chris</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Really like this podcast <img src='http://www.writingexcuses.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> Just pimped it on the blog. I got a book to review the other day with a hook that I thought was brilliant.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s by Lauren Groff, from The Monsters of Templeton:</p>
<p>&#8220;The day I returned to Templeton steeped in disgrace,the fifty foot corpse of a monster surfaced in Lake Glimmerglass.&#8221;</p>
<p>Tres cool. Maybe you could do a show on names &#8230; or maybe not, now that I think of it, how would you approach the subject?! Could be difficult.</p>
<p>Best wishes,<br />
~Chris</p>
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		<title>By: Mike Barker</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-197</link>
		<dc:creator>Mike Barker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 03:12:28 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-197</guid>
		<description>I've put up a summary of this episode at
http://mbarker.livejournal.com/62405.html

Hope it helps</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve put up a summary of this episode at<br />
<a href="http://mbarker.livejournal.com/62405.html" rel="nofollow">http://mbarker.livejournal.com/62405.html</a></p>
<p>Hope it helps</p>
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		<title>By: Sam</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-138</link>
		<dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 13 Mar 2008 13:52:46 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-138</guid>
		<description>What about prologues?  That might be a can of worms, but I was hoping you would talk about it during the podcast and it never came up.  When is a prolgue appropriate, and when is it extraneous?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What about prologues?  That might be a can of worms, but I was hoping you would talk about it during the podcast and it never came up.  When is a prolgue appropriate, and when is it extraneous?</p>
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		<title>By: Lauren</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-118</link>
		<dc:creator>Lauren</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Mar 2008 16:24:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-118</guid>
		<description>Thanks for your help.  I really enjoy these podcasts!  Maybe I'll get to meet some of you sometime since I live in Orem, UT.

Lauren</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for your help.  I really enjoy these podcasts!  Maybe I&#8217;ll get to meet some of you sometime since I live in Orem, UT.</p>
<p>Lauren</p>
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		<title>By: Matthew Bowman</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-115</link>
		<dc:creator>Matthew Bowman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Mar 2008 20:48:54 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-115</guid>
		<description>One problem with the transcript is that I am still completely unused to your voices and I have my own hearing problem regarding processing. I can get all your words, but sometimes the voices run together. However, I assume that one of you can put in the right names if I get them wrong or leave it blank.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One problem with the transcript is that I am still completely unused to your voices and I have my own hearing problem regarding processing. I can get all your words, but sometimes the voices run together. However, I assume that one of you can put in the right names if I get them wrong or leave it blank.</p>
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		<title>By: Howard Tayler</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-113</link>
		<dc:creator>Howard Tayler</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Mar 2008 05:02:44 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-113</guid>
		<description>Thanks, Matthew!

If you'll email the transcript to one of us, we can post it on the site here where it's easy to find, and will remain archived with the podcasts themselves.

--Howard (... dot tayler at gmail dot com)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Matthew!</p>
<p>If you&#8217;ll email the transcript to one of us, we can post it on the site here where it&#8217;s easy to find, and will remain archived with the podcasts themselves.</p>
<p>&#8211;Howard (&#8230; dot tayler at gmail dot com)</p>
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		<title>By: Matthew Bowman</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-110</link>
		<dc:creator>Matthew Bowman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Mar 2008 02:24:05 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-110</guid>
		<description>I'm willing to make a transcript. I'm not a font of time myself, but I already took a few notes on the earlier ones. I type fast, so it might not take me much time. 

I'll just go ahead and make one for episode 4 anyway and see how long it takes me. If it isn't too much trouble, I can go back to episode 1 and go from there.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m willing to make a transcript. I&#8217;m not a font of time myself, but I already took a few notes on the earlier ones. I type fast, so it might not take me much time. </p>
<p>I&#8217;ll just go ahead and make one for episode 4 anyway and see how long it takes me. If it isn&#8217;t too much trouble, I can go back to episode 1 and go from there.</p>
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		<title>By: Steven</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-109</link>
		<dc:creator>Steven</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 16:26:15 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-109</guid>
		<description>Eh. Its alright. I just wondered.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Eh. Its alright. I just wondered.</p>
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		<title>By: Brian</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-108</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 09:19:40 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-108</guid>
		<description>Ok, I did remember it correctly...I looked it up to be sure... "The sky above the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel."</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ok, I did remember it correctly&#8230;I looked it up to be sure&#8230; &#8220;The sky above the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Michael</title>
		<link>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-107</link>
		<dc:creator>Michael</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Mar 2008 07:14:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingexcuses.com/2008/03/02/writing-excuses-episode-4-beginnings/#comment-107</guid>
		<description>...So, what is the first line of Neuromancer?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8230;So, what is the first line of Neuromancer?</p>
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