11.21: Q&A on Elemental Horror, with Steve Diamond

Steve Diamond joins us for our third and final Elemental Horror episode as we field your questions about this particular building block. Here are the questions we selected from your submissions:

  • If I want to make peanut butter terrifying without being silly, how do I do that?
  • What is your personal line between horror and “gore-nography?”
  • How do you avoid going too far with graphic elements?
  • Soundtracks are huge for horror movies. How do you set the mood without this tool?
  • What’s the best way for a thriller writer to edge into writing horror?
  • How do you decide when to show the monster, and how does it change the story when that happens?

Credits: This episode was recorded by Daniel Thompson, and mastered by Alex Jackson. 

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Writing Prompt: Outline a story in which your character must choose to do something horrific.

Audiobook Pick-of-the-Week: I Am Legend, by Richard Matheson, narrated by Robertson Dean

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Announcing (…drum roll…) the 2016 Scholarship Winners!

We have processed the applications, read the submissions, and made the extremely difficult decisions, and the dust has cleared to reveal the four incredible scholarship recipients for this year’s Writing Excuses Retreat.

I called them winners in the title, but that’s misleading: this is not something they drew in a lottery, or stumbled over in a random contest, this is an award that they have earned, and we could not be more delighted to have them with us on the cruise. Please join us in congratulating the 2016 recipients of the Carl Brandon scholarship and the Out of Excuses scholarship.

Carl Brandon Scholarship Winners:

Nilah Magruder
Jacquline Hopson

Out of Excuses Scholarship Winners:

Joseph Balanzategui
Rachel Seamount

A million thanks to everyone who applied. You gave us a ton of amazing applications this year–more than we’ve ever had–and it was very hard to pick only four.

Registration for the retreat—which, let’s not forget, is taking place on a cruise ship in the eastern Caribbean—is open until the final day of June, or until we reach 150 students, whichever comes first. If you want to join us, sign up today!

11.20: Horror as a Subgenre

Steve Diamond joins us again to talk horror, this time about using elemental horror as part of our stories’ elemental ensemble. We discuss how the sense of dread can be a page-turning motivation, and how it can complement the other “keep on reading” motivations we set out to invoke.

Credits: This episode was recorded by Daniel Thompson, and mastered by Alex Jackson. 

 

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Writing Prompt: Write a scene twice: first, write it so that there's humor, and then horror. Then write it so that the horror comes first, and the humor is last.

Audiobook Pick-of-the-Week: Swan Song, by Robert McCammon, narrated by Tom Stechshulte

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11.19: Fashion for Writers, with Rebecca McKinney

How do we go about describing the clothing our characters are wearing? How do we use that to add depth to our story? What are the common mistakes that writers make when they start dressing their characters?

Rebecca McKinney joined us on stage at LTUE to address all this.

Liner Notes: We mentioned some resources for those wanting to get clothing right in their work:

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Writing Prompt: Describe the same outfit from two different point of view characters.

Audiobook Pick-of-the-Week: Bluescreen, by Dan Wells, narrated by Roxanne Hernandez

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11.18: Elemental Horror

Steve Diamond joins us to kick off our month on the elemental genre of horror. We explore the emotional components that readers seek from horror, and then drill down into the ways that we can create those reactions in our readers.

Credits: This episode was recorded by Daniel Thompson, and mastered by Alex Jackson. 

 

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Writing Prompt: Take one of your favorite triumphant moments from a something you've read or watched, and rewrite it so that this triumph is the false victory that makes everything worse.

Audiobook Pick-of-the-Week: Residue, by Steve Diamond, narrated by David Stifel

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11.17: Elemental Adventure Q&A

You may still have questions about how to apply elemental adventure in your work. Hopefully your questions are similar to the ones we collected below, because these are the ones we answered:

  • What do readers like more: protagonists going through lots of different incidents and locations, or through a few that are similar to each other?
  • What lessons can we learn from adventure games?
  • How can we make action scenes that adventurous, but that are not fight scenes?
  • Are there tropes we should stay away from in adventure fiction?
  • Do you have suggestions for non-western styles of adventure fiction?
  • How do you safely skip the long, boring parts of a journey without missing out on necessary character development?

Credits: This episode was recorded by Daniel Thompson, and mastered by Alex Jackson. 

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Writing Prompt: Make a list of cool set pieces that people could visit. Figure out how your characters' entry into these places will change the places, your characters, and the story.

Audiobook Pick-of-the-Week: Alif the Unseen, by G. Willow Wilson, narrated by Sanjiv Jhaveri

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